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Silent eternities, spent in heart beats
Returning in unison.
Daylong seconds, suicidal smiles
A world that cannot be ignored

Home.

Old thoughts consume me
The darkness returning
Vivid memories replaying in slow motion
Ignored by screaming stars
Frozen in place once more

Forgotten.

Violent whispers engulf me
“ I remember you”
They comfort me

I need no comfort

Alone.

I step out from these untamed shadows
They refuse to relinquish control
But I will not give in
Not this time
Not today.

Alive.
©2005-2009 ~Shadowsfailing
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"no place like home"

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:iconnemesia:
I really enjoyed the structure and abstract sense. Nice word-choice. Lovely work overal.

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"Those who cannot captivate beauty are blind, and those who are blind have never lived.."
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Thank you for your praise.

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They say dead men tell no tales. Well I still have a few left.
:iconnemesia:
My pleasure dear.

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"Those who cannot captivate beauty are blind, and those who are blind have never lived.."

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