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Words fail
Voices fleeting
Acceptance washes over me
Vision without witness

Am I breathing?

Her eyes shatter
And beauty becomes a river
I am caught and conflicted
Not a word is spoken

Can she hear me?

If only time were fleeting
then maybe I could move.
If only you were breathing
then maybe I'd pull through.
If only you were gone
then maybe I'd stop feeling you
:iconshadowsfailing:

Author's Comments

I'm still alittle rusty but heres something I wrote today before work. Please comment. I know the ends alittle shoty but it somehow felt important to use the whole "move through you" thing. I dunno

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*hugs* I like it, I don't think it's shotty at all, but I do think you've changed a bit. I like it through.

Try not to be such a stranger anymore hun!

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Saying goodbye seemed easier when I didn't care...
:iconshadowsfailing:
i will definitely try. I missed you to much :P

I'm still finding my way around a key board again a little bit and i still struggle with trying to write stuff that isn't dark or painful but i guess that's just me lol

I'll try and post something else when i get back from the dawn service (its Anzac day (a day we commemorate the solders who served our country))

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They say dead men tell no tales. Well I still have a few left.
:iconangel-tears:
Believe it or not I'm familiar.. I mean you do know how ridiculously attached I got to you kiwis right?

So, I demand you get on msn (still using my same old e-mail) and talk to me Mr, or I swear I'll kick your ass. (Thats right, I will go across the globe just to kick your ass, and make you pay me back for the plane ticket :P)

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Saying goodbye seemed easier when I didn't care...
:iconshadowsfailing:
your gonna have to give me your email address again cause I'm pretty sure I blocked/deleted everybody one day. (don't ask)

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They say dead men tell no tales. Well I still have a few left.
:iconangel-tears:
Oh goodness..... But you know I want to ask.... *sigh* okay, rose_red_jean@msn.com

(also on my da page my friend!!)

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Saying goodbye seemed easier when I didn't care...
:iconshadowsfailing:
I'm sorry. I always remembered your DA page saying ask instead of your email address.

I guess I should have looked but thats me to a T.

LAY Z :P

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They say dead men tell no tales. Well I still have a few left.
:iconangel-tears:
no no, its there now PROMISE!!!

And I'm okay with you being lazy, now get off your bum and start talking to me mr!!! Ignore the time difference and adhere to my 19 year old wishes mr!!!!!!!! *cough* <-- ignore the tangent from the crazy girl on caffine

Talk to you later

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Saying goodbye seemed easier when I didn't care...

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